Today I talked to my teacher and put all my work up on the big screen so my fellow class mates could give me feed back on my work. I have very mixed comments saying that they liked one thing but didn't like that or others said to brighten up the background and darken the headlines. It was all very confusing for me so I took notes on each piece of work.
My Front Cover: Orange around main title and cover lines, Brighten the picture, add another cover line, Maybe change the cover lines to a straight angle not canted, change colour of EXCLUSIVE and MARTIN DYLAN and also change the colour of the writing under tickets because it is not readable.
My Contents: They like the version of it being black and white, instead of red and blue writing change it to orange ( same as front cover orange ), its to much blue, need other colours and change the font style.
DPS: All they said to this was change the background behind the writing, make the writing another colour, maybe think about the answers in white and questions in black. The font stands out over the main image.
By doing this I was able to change my front cover, contents and DPS for the best and now I agree with some of the comments that my class mates said as they form part of my Target Audience.
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